MJ took 10 minutes to write this. The stretch of story takes place in Chapter 10 of the Grobug Tales chapter book.
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October 07, 2023
Screeches tore through the mist and Tut turned to see several enemies rushing to support their comrade. Tut shouted “NOW!” and the waiting Grobug Guardians entered the battle.
Tut watched as the battlefield fragmented. The Guardians tried to push the Mockwings together where their size would inhibit their movement and take away their ability to attack the Grobugs. The invaders fought hard, striking fiercely as each turn they could. Shining Arms were pecked and pulled. One mist bird twisted and contorted its body so that talons sprouted from its face. It successfully grabbed several Shining Arms at once, pulling a few Guardians in towards the eager beaks of its fellow Mockwings.
[14 minutes, 111 Words]
Commnets:
A thought that’s been on my mind is the portrayal of the Mockwings. I’ve described these misty avian creatures with the ability to morph, even to the extent where talons emerge from their faces. Given they’re antagonists that harm children in the story, I felt emphasizing their eerie and unsettling nature was apt. However, I wonder, is the body horror element too much? I initially considered a milder transformation, but the allure of a more intense visual drew me in.
I’d love to hear your thoughts. Is the creepiness of the Mockwings fitting or excessive?
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